Think of a press release as exciting, breaking news about your company, product or service. Pick up any newspaper and read a couple stories–I suggest browsing well-written newspapers online such as the New York Times or even Vanity Fair magazine–and you’ll get an idea of how a story is structured.
Here are some tips after you’ve done the above:
- Write down the single most important fact for your customers and potential customers. Always focus your writing on answering your customer’s question “Why should I care about this?” Edit this down to one page-width sentence or less, and that’s your headline.
- Answer the journalistic questions of who, what, where, and when. Include how, if relevant This is the body of your press release.
- Write the release in third person, with your company being an “it” and staff members being “they.”
- This is news, not sales. If there’s something amazing about this news, put that into factual terms. Avoid exclamation marks whenever possible. (See? I avoided one right there, even though I feel strongly about it.)
- Include a quote from a company executive or customer. Interview them if need be. This quote should be in the third or fourth paragraph.
- The second-to-last paragraph is called a “boilerplate,” which is the three or four sentence description of your company, what it does, and how long its been doing it.
- The last paragraph is for your contact information. Always include the name and title of the person to contact, phone number, e-mail address, website, and an offer to be available for interviews.
- Make your release one page maximum if possible.
Happy writing.
Nala

Just wanted to say HI. I found your blog a few days ago on Technorati and have been reading it over the past few days.
Hi Dan. Thanks for reading!